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Michael
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"Publication is not all that it is cracked up to be. But writing is. Writing has so much to give, so much to teach, so many surprises. That thing you had to force yourself to do -- the actual act of writing -- turns out to be the best part. It's like discovering that while you thought you needed the tea ceremony for the caffeine, what you really needed was the tea ceremony." -- Anne Lamott, Bird by Bird, xxvi. |
Everyone . . . always . . . with no exceptions . . . needs to be working on their writing. Period.
Everything we do is through the medium of language, and in whatever endeavor you embark upon after college, you will be asked to write in some form or another. Working on your writing now will help you in this class, other classes, and further down the line. Perhaps nothing is more important in your college experience than learning how to write and argue well.
Writing is particularly important to students of history. History is intimately bound up with language. What, for example, is PRE-history? It was before the written word. You cannot convincingly discuss the past if you cannot put your arguments into words, sentences, and paragraphs that "work."
Here are a few tips for writing well. Below I give you an interpretation of some of my common proofreading marks, followed by a number of important components to effective writing. I give a few brief quotes from the wonderful book on writing, Bird by Bird, and end with a sort of checklist of what I look for in papers.
First, the small stuff. When you get a paper back from me, you might see some of these marks in the text/margins. Here is what they mean.
Common Proofreading Marks
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| checkmark | a good point, point well made |
| awk | a point where phrasing or wording is awkward |
| sp | spelling error |
| frag or fragment | sentence fragment, an incomplete sentence |
| ( ) | around my comments = a more minor point I'm making; around your writing = defining the point I'm making in the margins |
| backwards "P" | paragraph -- often that you need a new paragraph for a new point |
| ^ | insert at this point |
Common Footnote and Bibliography Forms
One of my most frequently asked questions is about proper footnote form. Here are merely the basics, including examples of various forms in action.
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As there are a multitude of sources, there are also
a multitude of possible entries for footnotes and bibliographies. Historians
use the "Chicago" style for the most part; see Jules Benjamin,
A Student's Guide to History to get a more complete picture of
how to cite material.
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Footnotes
Here's an example of footnotes that use the forms for an article, book, and a second citation:
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The basics of footnote form: first line (only) is indented 1/2 inch; use superscripts for numbering (easy in all recent vintage word processing programs -- see box below). How to order this information:
Book: author's first name and last, Title of Book Capitalized and either Underlined or in Italics (Place of Publication: Publisher, date of publication), specific page number(s) you are referring to.
Article: author's first name and last, "Title of Article Capitalized and Inside Quotation Marks" Journal Title Capitalized and either Underlined or in Italics volume number (year of publication): specific page number(s) you are referring to.
Second time you cite a the same source: author's last name, page number. [unless you have two works by the author, in which case a brief title is also given.]
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How easy is it to create a footnote in Word? (WordPerfect would be similar)
You can view them by clicking the "view" pull down menu (or viewing the whole document in "print layout" mode) and clicking on footnote; you can create them via pull down menus as well: "insert" - "reference" - "footnote". But easiest? Clearly getting to the point where you want one, and ctrl-alt-F. Easy! |
Bibliography
Here's an example of bibliographic forms for an article and book:
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The basics: entries appear in alphabetical order, the first line is not indented, lines in each entry after the first are indented 1/2 inch, single spaced within each entry, double space between entries (again, easy in word processing programs). The order and punctuation are a little different from footnotes:
Book: author's last name, author's first name. Title of Book Capitalized and either Underlined or in Italics. Place of Publication: Publisher, date of publication.
Article: author's last name, author's first name."Title of Article Capitalized and Inside Quotation Marks" Journal Title Capitalized and either Underlined or in Italics. volume number (year of publication): complete (inclusive -- not just the page number you quoted in the text, but the whole article) page numbers.
It's that simple.
However, writing is about much more than using the correct footnote forms and learning to avoid spelling errors and sentence fragments. It is about putting together your ideas in such a way as to make your argument about the past convincing.
Important Components to Strong and Effective Writing
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As important as getting the facts straight. A paper needs to be accurate, but as important, it needs to show that you see just what is important, what it is connected to, and what evidence best supports that important point. History is about bringing meaning to past events - you do that through how you characterize those events and what you connect them to. |
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A safe bet - mixing tenses can easily confuse your writing |
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This makes quite a difference in the power of your writing. We often write tentatively, stepping back from making strong statements, and that leads to very weak and unclear writing. "Passive voice" is the term for this sort of indirect writing, and it is best to avoid it altogether.
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Before you write, spend time thinking about your argument and how to make it flow logically from one point to the next - what points are connected? what is the most important one and why? what points are less important but still worthy of mention? What issues are really not important enough to warrant pursuing in a paper of this length? Think this through before writing. [see also the hint on piggie-backing ideas at the end of this site] |
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This is an absolutely wonderful, moving, and hilarious book on writing, well worth the read. |
An Acclaimed Writer Reflects upon Short Assignments:
"Thirty years ago my older brother, who was ten years old at the time, was trying to get a report on birds written that he'd had three months to write, which was due the next day. We were out at our family cabin in Bolinas, and he was at the kitchen table close to tears, surrounded by binder paper and pencils and unopened books on birds, immobilized by the hugeness of the task ahead. Then my father sat down beside him, put his arm around my brother's shoulder, and said, "Bird by bird, buddy. Just take it bird by bird." "I tell this story again because it usually makes a dent in the tremendous sense of being overwhelmed that my students experience. . ."
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This one sounds weird, but trust me - reading your paper out loud will show you what is not working, where the rough places are. You use a different part of your brain when you hear/speak than when you look, and hearing the words gives you a different perspective. |
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This one might be a lost cause for undergrads so pressed for time, but there is nothing that will improve your work more than writing a draft early, letting it sit for a day, then coming back to it and looking at it afresh. If you want to improve your writing, this is how. |
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This is so very good that I bought copies for all of my family members. Trust me, it is worth the read. |
Anne Lamott on First Drafts: "People tend to look at successful writers, writers who are getting their books published and maybe even doing well financially, and think that they sit down at their desks every morning feeling like a million dollars, feeling great about who they are and how much talent they have and what a great story they have to tell; that they take a few deep breaths, push back their sleeves, roll their necks a few times to get all the cricks out, and dive in, typing fully formed passages as fast as a court reporter. But this is just the fantasy of the uninitiated. I know some very good writers, writers you love who write beautifully and have made a great deal of money, and not one of them sits down routinely feeling wildly enthusiastic and confident. Not one of them writes elegant first drafts. All right, one of them does, but we do not like her very much . . ." What is the secret then? Rewriting: My "writing would be terrible. I'd write a lead paragraph that was a whole page, even though the entire review [food review for a magazine] could only be three pages long . . . but eventually I would let myself trust the process - sort of, more or less. I'd write a first draft that was maybe twice as long as it should be, with self-indulgent and boring beginning . . . and no end to speak of. The whole thing would be so long and incoherent and hideous that for the rest of the day I'd obsess about getting creamed by a car before I could write a decent second draft. I'd worry that people would read what I'd written and believe that the accident had really been a suicide, that I had panicked because my talent was waning and my mind was shot." "The next day, though, I'd sit down, go through it all with a colored
pen, take out everything I possibly could, find a new lead somewhere on
the second page, figure out a kicky place to end it, and then write a
second draft. It always turned out fine, sometimes even funny and weird
and helpful. I'd go over it one more time and mail it in."
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A Useful "Trick" of Strong Critical Thinking: Most writing assignments, whether in history courses or not, ask you to pare down a huge amount of information that people have written whole books about -- the Causes of the Civil War, for instance, or the Significance of Shakespeare's Sonnets -- into a relatively brief essay. Much of what you are doing, really, is deciding what to leave out, using your judgment about what is most important (central to your paper), rather important (secondary points in your paper), and less important (left out of your paper). It is good to think consciously about this process as you outline your essay and as you write. Here is a good "trick" for demonstrating most clearly how you have used good judgment in sifting through the material for your essay. Center your answer upon the best and most telling or important points that you can make using the strongest evidence that you can use. But in the process, also briefly gesture to other, less important pieces of evidence that similarly support the point you are making. Not every piece of your argument needs to be fully explored and explicated -- packaging a very strong point along with similar subsidiary points makes the argument as a whole much stronger and shows greater breadth of your understanding. This is a little vague and could use an example. Here is one. Imagine this paragraph as a portion of a paper on the Progressive era:
This is a fine paragraph, but it is singularly focused upon the one issue. It could be stronger still if the writer demonstrated that he/she saw connections between this issue and other similar ones. Look at how little one would have to add to this paragraph to achieve this:
In this second paragraph, the author demonstrates the broad terrain of the issue and the place of national parks within it. The author needn't write whole paragraphs on the Boy Scouts and City Beautification -- simply mentioning them as auxiliary points to the main issue of national parks strengthens the whole and demonstrates an understanding of the big picture and what it all means. |
So,
What is it that I look for when I grade your papers?
What I am most eager to find there?
Need more guidance?
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This website is occasionally maintained by Michael
Trotti.
(Last update: 11 January 2006). |