College Planning Guide



How to write a compelling personal essay, part two

Begin writing.

Rough out a few paragraphs just to get going. Chances are you'll hate everything you write, but never mind. You're just warming up. Buried in all your scribbling -- maybe three or four paragraphs down -- will be your prize: the perfect, attention-getting, honest, and intriguing opening sentence. Go from there to build . . .

  • Your introduction -- It's the most important part of your essay, so give it the most attention. Grab our staff's attention and don't let go. Raise questions. Create mystery. Begin telling your story as if you are talking to your best friend.
  • Your supporting paragraphs -- Details, details, details. Make our admissions staff do more than read your essay. Make them see it.
  • Your conclusion -- It doesn't have to earth-shattering. It doesn't even have to be profound. But it does have to be strong, confident, and, above all, a genuine reflection of how your essay represents you.

Take a break. Stuff your essay in a folder, and get away from it for a day or two. You'll come back to it with fresh eyes and perspective.

Read it out loud. Be sure your essay sounds like you. Remember, our admissions staff will look to your essay as a way to get to know the real you.

Proofread, rewrite, and proofread again. Fix grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, and typos. Rework awkward transitions. Delete anything that doesn't ring true or carry weight. And don't forget to do a word count and keep your essay under 500 words.

Have someone else read it. Two heads are always better than one. Ask a favorite teacher or family member to read and critique your essay. If he or she says your essay is silly, confusing, or just plain boring, don't argue. Rewrite it.

Write a final draft and type it up!